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TG Shorty: Aftertaste

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The best flavors are the ones that stay with you...
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Greetings fellow captionites, Hero here with another shorty because apparently this is a thing now. While I quite like making this little snippets of TG stories, a part of me still prefers writing more full-length ones. Which is why I'm almost done with the final draft of "To Understand a Girl..."s second chapter. In addition, I'm almost done with another regular caption, so expect more from me soon.

Awful news though gang, I'm afraid I've come down with a terrible case of Lackocritiqueoitis, and the only way to cure it is if you leave some helpful tidbits for me to improve my work! Your opinion matters to me, so don't leave me hanging. Plus... seriously... *cough*.... I'm dying.
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:iconahehplz: Nyu definyately seem to have a knack for these shorties.  Nyu have a good balance between text and picture, the text is easy to read, and the picture doesn't draw too much attention from the text.  I don't see much that could be improved-nya. :heart: :iconazu-nyanplz: